The end:
He climbed out of the
hole, glistening in mud. He really was beautiful. We admired him. We exhaled
smoke again, slowly this time. Thoughtful.
“So, I will be killed,
now?” Alec asked us. After a long time, everything was quiet and none of us
responded. To be honest, I kind of regretted of having an idea to kill Alec. I
was thinking if it was too crazy and cruel to kill such a beautiful man who
spent a wonderful time with me at least. I raised my head to see reactions of Caroline,
Anje, Tiffany and Marlena. They all lower their heads as if they did something shameful.
“Alec! Where is Alec?” I shouted because I could not find Alec. “Bang” I felt a
bullet coming across my body. I turned my head back in a huge pain, seeing Alec
holding a gun. And then, after four quick shots, I saw Caroline, Anje, Tiffany
and Marlena fell down with an astonished face. Before I lost my consciousness, I
saw Alec smiled strangely.
Reasons:
Firstly, in your stories, when Alec was informed
he would be killed, he did nothing to resist or escape. I thought it was too weird
and there must be some reasons behind. Therefore, I considered that Alec
pretend to be weak at first on purpose in order to kill all the women in the
end. Secondly, I could not feel women’s strong hatred towards Alex in your
stories. Even in the latter part, women recalled fond memories spending with
Alex and said “we love you” to Alec. I thought they were hesitating whether to
kill Alec or not. This ending not only makes the behaviors of Alec and five
women reasonable, but also successfully has a surprising effect.
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